Biology personal statement guide

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Biology Personal Statementfor Oxford, Cambridge & Imperial

Oxford, Cambridge & Imperial出願用のBiology Personal Statement完全例文(UCAS 2026年度3問形式)。入試担当者が何を求めているかを知る専門家が執筆。

重要な情報 · 形式変更

2025年10月以降のPersonal Statement形式について

2025年10月以降に出願する応募者は、1つの自由記述形式ではなく、UCASが「scaffolding questions」と呼ぶ3つのセクションに回答する新しい形式に従う必要があります。下記の例文はすべてこの形式に従って書かれています。

  1. 01なぜこのコース・分野を学びたいですか?
  2. 02これまでの学習はどのようにこの分野への準備に役立ちましたか?
  3. 03学校外で何を経験しましたか?それらはなぜ有益ですか?

各セクションは最低350文字。全体で最大4,000文字(3セクション合計)。

保護者向け日本語ガイド

生物学(生命科学) | Personal Statementとは

Personal Statementとは何ですか?

Personal Statementは、UCASオンラインシステムを通じてイギリスの大学へ提出する「志望理由書」です。 なぜその学科を学びたいか、どのような準備をしてきたか、課外活動でどのような経験を積んだかを英語で記述します。 字数制限があり(合計4,000字まで)、すべての志望大学に同じ文章を使います。

2026年度の新しい形式(3問方式)

2026年度入学(2025年9月以降の出願)から、Personal Statementの形式が変わりました:

質問1(各最低350字)

なぜこのコースを学びたいのか?

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

質問2(各最低350字)

学業の準備はどのようにしてきたか?

How have your qualifications and studies helped you prepare?

質問3(各最低350字)

課外活動でどのような経験をしてきたか?

What else have you done to prepare outside of education?

Oxford・Cambridgeが重視すること

  • 学科への本物の知的関心(スポーツや慈善活動は重視されない)
  • 生物学(生命科学)に関連する書籍・研究・発展的学習(Supercurricular)の経験
  • 何を読んで、何を考え、何を疑問に思ったか。具体的な事例
  • 面接で詳しく話せる内容のみ書くこと(面接の出発点になる)

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このページには生物学(生命科学)のPersonal Statement例文(英語)が掲載されています。お子様がこれを参考にしながら、オリジナルの文章を書くためのガイドとして活用してください。コピーは厳禁ですが、構成や深さの参考にはなります。

以下は詳細ガイドと例文(英語)です。お子様と一緒にご確認ください。

01

Section 01

Biology Personal Statement 例文

Question 1

1,000 chars

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Reading about AlphaFold2's performance in CASP14 in 2020 made me think differently about proteins. A polypeptide starts as a linear sequence, yet folds into a structure precise enough to determine binding and catalysis. What interested me was not just that a system could predict that structure, but what the prediction implied biologically: if folding is so constrained by sequence, why can one substitution leave a protein looking almost unchanged while still altering its function? That question sent me back to tertiary structure and enzyme action. I began to look beyond textbook diagrams of hydrogen bonds, ionic interactions and disulfide bridges and think about the balance they create: proteins have to be stable enough to work, but flexible enough to change and interact. That is what makes biology worth studying at degree level for me. I want to study molecular biology in more depth, especially where sequence, structure and regulation produce behaviour that is patterned but not simple.

Question 2

1,205 chars

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare?

My studies have given that interest a more precise direction. In A-level biology, the induced-fit model made me think about enzymes as dynamic rather than rigid. Catalysis depends on geometry, but also on movement, charge and environment, which helped me connect protein structure to function more carefully. Because I kept returning to the gap between tidy molecular explanations and messy biological behaviour, I used my EPQ to investigate how pH and temperature affect catalase activity in potato extract. I prepared the extract, reacted it with hydrogen peroxide under buffered conditions, collected oxygen with a gas syringe and used the earliest part of each run to calculate initial reaction rates in Excel. My first results looked suspiciously neat. Repeating the trials showed why: small differences in preparation changed the apparent enzyme concentration enough to distort the pattern. Standardising the extraction volume, keeping samples on ice between runs and focusing on the initial rate improved the reliability of the data, but the project mattered most because it made the limits of simple explanations visible. That process made me more careful about what counts as evidence in biology.

Question 3

1,506 chars

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Outside formal education, I tried to follow the same questions further. Reading Jumper et al.'s 2021 Nature paper on AlphaFold showed me that the achievement was not only the reported accuracy, but the way the system used patterns across evolutionarily related sequences. It made proteins seem less like isolated objects and more like records of selection, while also making a limit clearer to me: predicting a fold is not the same as explaining a cell. That led me to Siddhartha Mukherjee's The Gene, which challenged my earlier habit of thinking of biology too neatly, as though DNA simply moved towards an outcome. His discussion of regulation and expression made me more interested in how biological information is filtered from transcription to folding to cellular response. Taking part in the British Biology Olympiad reinforced that interest because the questions rarely rewarded recall alone. I found the unfamiliar data on genetics and physiology more useful than straightforward syllabus questions because they forced me to build explanations from patterns and competing possibilities rather than search for a memorised fact. Working part-time in a supermarket has also made me calmer when routines change and more attentive to people who explain the same problem differently, which helped when I was mentoring younger students in our school biology society. Those experiences have made me more patient with uncertainty and more willing to revise an explanation when the evidence does not fit it.
3,711total charactersWithin UCAS range

This is an illustrative example reviewed for factual accuracy. Use it for structure and reflection quality, not for copying.

02

Section 02

BiologyのPersonal Statementには何を含めるべきか?

内容

分野への深い理解

学校のシラバスを超えたBiologyの知識。読んだ本・追加学習・独自調査の証拠。

思考

批判的な反省

「何をしたか」ではなく「そこから何を学び、考え方がどう変わったか」を書く。

具体性

具体的な証拠

本のタイトル・著者名・出来事・実験など、面接で詳しく説明できる具体例を必ず含める。

構成

一貫した物語

Q1からQ3まで一本の知的な軌跡が通っていること。各答えはそれぞれ独立しつつ、全体で1つの物語を形成する。

03

Section 03

やること・避けること

Do This

  • Open Q1 with a specific idea, question, or moment, not a cliche
  • Show genuine intellectual curiosity about Biology throughout all three answers
  • Reference specific books, papers, or lectures and reflect on what you took from them
  • Use each question to show something different: motivation, preparation, initiative
  • Let your authentic voice come through; tutors can spot a template

Avoid This

  • Start Q1 with "I have always been passionate about Biology"
  • List activities without reflecting on what you learned from them
  • Name-drop books or theorists you cannot discuss at interview
  • Repeat the same point across multiple answers
  • Waste space on irrelevant extracurriculars or filler phrases
04

Section 04

Oxford・Cambridgeが求めるもの

OxfordとCambridgeの入試担当者はBiologyのPersonal Statementを特定の視点で読みます。実績や課外活動の羅列ではなく、学校のシラバスを超えたレベルでbiologyに真剣に取り組んだ証拠、そして読んだり経験したことについて批判的に考える能力を求めています。

Cambridgeでは、面接官はPersonal Statementを面接質問の出発点として使うことが多いです。本・研究論文・実験に言及した場合、詳細を聞かれると思ってください。つまり、陳述書に書くことはすべて真実であり、深く理解されていなければなりません——効果のために名前を出すだけでは不十分です。

Oxfordでは、Personal Statementは入試テストのスコア・学校からの推薦状・面接のパフォーマンスとともに総合的な出願書類の一部として評価されます。Oxfordの講師は公式に、知的好奇心・アイデア間のつながりを作る能力・自主的にカリキュラムを超えた取り組みをした証拠を重視すると述べています。

上記の例文はこれらの要件を念頭に置いて設計されています。BiologyでOxfordまたはCambridgeを目指しているなら、自分のPersonal Statementが目指すべき深さと具体性の基準として活用してください。

よくあるご質問

Your personal statement must be no longer than 4,000 characters (including spaces) or 47 lines, whichever limit you hit first. Most successful statements use close to the full character allowance.
Start with a specific academic idea, question, or experience that sparked your interest in Biology. Avoid clichés like "I have always been passionate about…" Admissions tutors read hundreds of statements — an opening that shows genuine intellectual curiosity stands out more than a dramatic hook.
Only if they are directly relevant to your academic interest in Biology. Oxbridge tutors want to see evidence of intellectual engagement with the subject, not a list of achievements.
Most successful applicants go through 5 to 10 drafts. Start with a rough structure, then refine your arguments and examples. Ask a teacher or tutor who knows Biology at university level to give feedback.
Yes — discussing a specific experiment, paper, or scientific concept you have explored beyond the syllabus is one of the strongest signals of genuine interest. Choose something you can talk about in depth at interview. Briefly explain what interested you and what questions it raised, rather than just name-dropping.

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