HSPS personal statement guide

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HSPS Personal Statementfor Cambridge

Cambridge出願用のHSPS Personal Statement完全例文(UCAS 2026年度3問形式)。入試担当者が何を求めているかを知る専門家が執筆。

重要な情報 · 形式変更

2025年10月以降のPersonal Statement形式について

2025年10月以降に出願する応募者は、1つの自由記述形式ではなく、UCASが「scaffolding questions」と呼ぶ3つのセクションに回答する新しい形式に従う必要があります。下記の例文はすべてこの形式に従って書かれています。

  1. 01なぜこのコース・分野を学びたいですか?
  2. 02これまでの学習はどのようにこの分野への準備に役立ちましたか?
  3. 03学校外で何を経験しましたか?それらはなぜ有益ですか?

各セクションは最低350文字。全体で最大4,000文字(3セクション合計)。

保護者向け日本語ガイド

人文社会科学(HSPS) | Personal Statementとは

Personal Statementとは何ですか?

Personal Statementは、UCASオンラインシステムを通じてイギリスの大学へ提出する「志望理由書」です。 なぜその学科を学びたいか、どのような準備をしてきたか、課外活動でどのような経験を積んだかを英語で記述します。 字数制限があり(合計4,000字まで)、すべての志望大学に同じ文章を使います。

2026年度の新しい形式(3問方式)

2026年度入学(2025年9月以降の出願)から、Personal Statementの形式が変わりました:

質問1(各最低350字)

なぜこのコースを学びたいのか?

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

質問2(各最低350字)

学業の準備はどのようにしてきたか?

How have your qualifications and studies helped you prepare?

質問3(各最低350字)

課外活動でどのような経験をしてきたか?

What else have you done to prepare outside of education?

Oxford・Cambridgeが重視すること

  • 学科への本物の知的関心(スポーツや慈善活動は重視されない)
  • 人文社会科学(HSPS)に関連する書籍・研究・発展的学習(Supercurricular)の経験
  • 何を読んで、何を考え、何を疑問に思ったか。具体的な事例
  • 面接で詳しく話せる内容のみ書くこと(面接の出発点になる)

このページの使い方

このページには人文社会科学(HSPS)のPersonal Statement例文(英語)が掲載されています。お子様がこれを参考にしながら、オリジナルの文章を書くためのガイドとして活用してください。コピーは厳禁ですが、構成や深さの参考にはなります。

以下は詳細ガイドと例文(英語)です。お子様と一緒にご確認ください。

01

Section 01

HSPS Personal Statement 例文

Question 1

1,000 chars

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

The dispute over Edward Colston's statue in Bristol made me want to study HSPS because it showed me that one public object can carry several incompatible meanings at once. Watching the statue be pulled down and pushed into the harbour on 7 June 2020, then following the acquittal of the Colston Four in January 2022, I became interested in why the same event could be framed as criminal damage, historical reckoning, disorder or justice. What interested me was not only the event itself, but the struggle over who had the authority to define it. That question could not be answered by politics alone. It made me want to study how institutions claim legitimacy, how social norms shape judgement, and how communities inherit, contest or refuse public narratives. HSPS appeals to me because it would let me examine that problem through politics, sociology and anthropology together. What attracts me most is that the course does not force a false choice between institutions and everyday social meaning.

Question 2

1,524 chars

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare?

My A level subjects have given me the first tools for thinking about those questions seriously. In Sociology, Becker's labelling theory helped me see deviance not as a fixed quality but as a status produced through social reaction. That made me think more carefully about why the same protest could be described as principled, criminal or inevitable depending on who was speaking. In Politics, studying liberalism and the state sharpened a related issue: authority does not rest only on rules and sanctions, but on whether people accept institutions as legitimate. I wanted to test those ideas through sustained work, so I used my EPQ to ask, "Who gets represented in public space, and who gets to decide?" I drew on Bristol City Council material on the proposed plaque wording, reporting on the Colston Four trial and Bristol Museums material on the statue's display at M Shed. My first draft was too moralistic. I kept trying to decide what should have happened, when the more interesting question was why different groups were applying such different standards of judgement. Revising it forced me to separate explanation from endorsement. I built a spreadsheet to sort headlines by the language they used, including "disorder", "heritage" and "community", and this made me notice how often the dispute turned on who was allowed to define the public interest. The project taught me that disagreement over the statue was also disagreement over categories themselves: what counted as history, damage and the public interest.

Question 3

1,252 chars

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Outside formal education, independent reading has been the main way I have pushed this interest further. Howard S. Becker's Outsiders made me think more carefully about who gets to attach labels in the first place. Benedict Anderson's Imagined Communities helped me see monuments as part of the stories through which nations present themselves as coherent, while David Olusoga's Black and British shifted my attention from whether a statue should stand to how one version of history becomes ordinary enough to pass without comment. James C. Scott's Seeing Like a State then led me towards anthropology by showing how institutions rely on simplified categories that make populations more legible, even when those categories flatten lived experience. When I turned some of these ideas into a presentation at school, the discussion exposed a weakness in my thinking: I had focused heavily on institutions, but not enough on how people use, ignore or resist official categories in everyday life. Having to defend the argument aloud made me see where I had made the conflict look too neat. That made me more interested in how power works not only through laws and institutions, but through ordinary social life and the meanings people give to shared spaces.
3,776total charactersWithin UCAS range

This is an illustrative example reviewed for factual accuracy. Use it for structure and reflection quality, not for copying.

02

Section 02

HSPSのPersonal Statementには何を含めるべきか?

内容

分野への深い理解

学校のシラバスを超えたHSPSの知識。読んだ本・追加学習・独自調査の証拠。

思考

批判的な反省

「何をしたか」ではなく「そこから何を学び、考え方がどう変わったか」を書く。

具体性

具体的な証拠

本のタイトル・著者名・出来事・実験など、面接で詳しく説明できる具体例を必ず含める。

構成

一貫した物語

Q1からQ3まで一本の知的な軌跡が通っていること。各答えはそれぞれ独立しつつ、全体で1つの物語を形成する。

03

Section 03

やること・避けること

Do This

  • Open Q1 with a specific idea, question, or moment, not a cliche
  • Show genuine intellectual curiosity about HSPS throughout all three answers
  • Reference specific books, papers, or lectures and reflect on what you took from them
  • Use each question to show something different: motivation, preparation, initiative
  • Let your authentic voice come through; tutors can spot a template

Avoid This

  • Start Q1 with "I have always been passionate about HSPS"
  • List activities without reflecting on what you learned from them
  • Name-drop books or theorists you cannot discuss at interview
  • Repeat the same point across multiple answers
  • Waste space on irrelevant extracurriculars or filler phrases
04

Section 04

Cambridgeが求めるもの

Cambridgeの入試担当者はHSPSのPersonal Statementを特定の視点で読みます。実績や課外活動の羅列ではなく、学校のシラバスを超えたレベルでhspsに真剣に取り組んだ証拠、そして読んだり経験したことについて批判的に考える能力を求めています。

Cambridgeでは、面接官はPersonal Statementを面接質問の出発点として使うことが多いです。本・研究論文・実験に言及した場合、詳細を聞かれると思ってください。つまり、陳述書に書くことはすべて真実であり、深く理解されていなければなりません——効果のために名前を出すだけでは不十分です。

上記の例文はこれらの要件を念頭に置いて設計されています。HSPSでCambridgeを目指しているなら、自分のPersonal Statementが目指すべき深さと具体性の基準として活用してください。

よくあるご質問

Your personal statement must be no longer than 4,000 characters (including spaces) or 47 lines, whichever limit you hit first. Most successful statements use close to the full character allowance.
Start with a specific academic idea, question, or experience that sparked your interest in HSPS. Admissions tutors read hundreds of statements — an opening that shows genuine intellectual curiosity stands out.
Only if they are directly relevant to your academic interest in HSPS. Oxbridge tutors want evidence of intellectual engagement, not a list of achievements.
Most successful applicants go through 5 to 10 drafts. Ask a teacher or tutor who knows HSPS at university level to give feedback.
Current affairs can demonstrate engagement, but use them to show analytical thinking rather than just awareness. Instead of saying you are interested in a topic, explain a specific argument or debate you have analysed and what conclusions you drew. Admissions tutors want to see that you can think critically, not just that you read the news.

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