Computer Science personal statement guide

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Computer Science Personal Statementfor Oxford, Cambridge & Imperial

Oxford, Cambridge & Imperial出願用のComputer Science Personal Statement完全例文(UCAS 2026年度3問形式)。入試担当者が何を求めているかを知る専門家が執筆。

重要な情報 · 形式変更

2025年10月以降のPersonal Statement形式について

2025年10月以降に出願する応募者は、1つの自由記述形式ではなく、UCASが「scaffolding questions」と呼ぶ3つのセクションに回答する新しい形式に従う必要があります。下記の例文はすべてこの形式に従って書かれています。

  1. 01なぜこのコース・分野を学びたいですか?
  2. 02これまでの学習はどのようにこの分野への準備に役立ちましたか?
  3. 03学校外で何を経験しましたか?それらはなぜ有益ですか?

各セクションは最低350文字。全体で最大4,000文字(3セクション合計)。

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コンピュータサイエンス | Personal Statementとは

Personal Statementとは何ですか?

Personal Statementは、UCASオンラインシステムを通じてイギリスの大学へ提出する「志望理由書」です。 なぜその学科を学びたいか、どのような準備をしてきたか、課外活動でどのような経験を積んだかを英語で記述します。 字数制限があり(合計4,000字まで)、すべての志望大学に同じ文章を使います。

2026年度の新しい形式(3問方式)

2026年度入学(2025年9月以降の出願)から、Personal Statementの形式が変わりました:

質問1(各最低350字)

なぜこのコースを学びたいのか?

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

質問2(各最低350字)

学業の準備はどのようにしてきたか?

How have your qualifications and studies helped you prepare?

質問3(各最低350字)

課外活動でどのような経験をしてきたか?

What else have you done to prepare outside of education?

Oxford・Cambridgeが重視すること

  • 学科への本物の知的関心(スポーツや慈善活動は重視されない)
  • コンピュータサイエンスに関連する書籍・研究・発展的学習(Supercurricular)の経験
  • 何を読んで、何を考え、何を疑問に思ったか。具体的な事例
  • 面接で詳しく話せる内容のみ書くこと(面接の出発点になる)

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このページにはコンピュータサイエンスのPersonal Statement例文(英語)が掲載されています。お子様がこれを参考にしながら、オリジナルの文章を書くためのガイドとして活用してください。コピーは厳禁ですが、構成や深さの参考にはなります。

以下は詳細ガイドと例文(英語)です。お子様と一緒にご確認ください。

01

Section 01

Computer Science Personal Statement 例文

Question 1

1,296 chars

Why do you want to study this course or subject?

Computer Science interests me because it is a subject where ideas are tested quickly against reality. A method that sounds efficient in theory can break on awkward input, take too long, or become unreadable once it grows. I like that tension between abstraction and implementation. The more I have studied computing, the more I have wanted to understand not just how to make a program work, but why one approach is better than another and what trade-offs sit behind that choice. What keeps the subject engaging for me is the way small decisions can change a whole system. Choosing a different data structure, rewriting a condition, or rethinking how a problem is decomposed can affect speed, clarity and reliability at the same time. I have become especially interested in ideas such as recursion, abstraction and optimisation because they show that Computer Science is not only about writing code, but about structuring thought. Reading about automation, security and the effect software can have on behaviour has also made me see that systems are not neutral; they shape what people can do and what they trust. I want to study Computer Science at university because I want the theoretical depth to understand those decisions properly and the technical training to build systems more carefully.

Question 2

1,217 chars

How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare?

My studies have prepared me well because they have trained me to think under rules rather than rely on instinct. Mathematics has been the clearest example of this. It has taught me to move step by step, justify a method and test whether a conclusion really follows from the assumptions I started with. That discipline carries directly into Computer Science. When I break a problem into smaller parts, look for repeated structure, or compare one method with another, I am using the same habit of mind: make the logic explicit, then check it. Classroom computing has made that connection practical. Studying topics such as iteration, variables, abstraction and algorithm design has shown me that a correct program is only the beginning. The stronger solution is the one that can be explained, maintained and improved. The most useful lesson for me has come from debugging. When a program fails, it forces me to identify exactly which assumption was wrong instead of hiding behind a partly working answer. I have learned to test one change at a time, pay attention to edge cases and resist the temptation to patch problems blindly. That has made me more methodical and more honest about what I do and do not understand.

Question 3

1,379 chars

What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?

Outside lessons, I built a command-line task manager in Python to practise structuring a program around clear abstractions rather than writing everything in one block. I used dictionaries to store tasks with priorities and deadlines, implemented file-based persistence with JSON, and added sorting and filtering. The most useful part was refactoring. My first version worked but was difficult to extend because I had tangled the storage logic with the display logic. Separating them into distinct functions made the program easier to test and showed me why abstraction matters practically, not just as a concept in a textbook. I also worked through several chapters of Nand2Tetris, which changed how I understood computers. Building logic gates, then an ALU, then a simple CPU from first principles made the layers between hardware and software feel concrete rather than mysterious. What stayed with me was how each abstraction hides complexity in a way that makes the next layer possible. That idea now shapes how I think about software design as well. Tutoring younger students in mathematics has reinforced the same discipline. Explaining a method clearly forces me to identify where my own reasoning relies on assumption rather than logic. That habit of checking whether I can justify each step, not just get the right output, is what I want to develop further through a Computer Science degree.
3,892total charactersWithin UCAS range

This is an illustrative example reviewed for factual accuracy. Use it for structure and reflection quality, not for copying.

02

Section 02

Computer ScienceのPersonal Statementには何を含めるべきか?

内容

分野への深い理解

学校のシラバスを超えたComputer Scienceの知識。読んだ本・追加学習・独自調査の証拠。

思考

批判的な反省

「何をしたか」ではなく「そこから何を学び、考え方がどう変わったか」を書く。

具体性

具体的な証拠

本のタイトル・著者名・出来事・実験など、面接で詳しく説明できる具体例を必ず含める。

構成

一貫した物語

Q1からQ3まで一本の知的な軌跡が通っていること。各答えはそれぞれ独立しつつ、全体で1つの物語を形成する。

03

Section 03

やること・避けること

Do This

  • Open Q1 with a specific idea, question, or moment, not a cliche
  • Show genuine intellectual curiosity about Computer Science throughout all three answers
  • Reference specific books, papers, or lectures and reflect on what you took from them
  • Use each question to show something different: motivation, preparation, initiative
  • Let your authentic voice come through; tutors can spot a template

Avoid This

  • Start Q1 with "I have always been passionate about Computer Science"
  • List activities without reflecting on what you learned from them
  • Name-drop books or theorists you cannot discuss at interview
  • Repeat the same point across multiple answers
  • Waste space on irrelevant extracurriculars or filler phrases
04

Section 04

Oxford・Cambridgeが求めるもの

OxfordとCambridgeの入試担当者はComputer ScienceのPersonal Statementを特定の視点で読みます。実績や課外活動の羅列ではなく、学校のシラバスを超えたレベルでcomputer scienceに真剣に取り組んだ証拠、そして読んだり経験したことについて批判的に考える能力を求めています。

Cambridgeでは、面接官はPersonal Statementを面接質問の出発点として使うことが多いです。本・研究論文・実験に言及した場合、詳細を聞かれると思ってください。つまり、陳述書に書くことはすべて真実であり、深く理解されていなければなりません——効果のために名前を出すだけでは不十分です。

Oxfordでは、Personal Statementは入試テストのスコア・学校からの推薦状・面接のパフォーマンスとともに総合的な出願書類の一部として評価されます。Oxfordの講師は公式に、知的好奇心・アイデア間のつながりを作る能力・自主的にカリキュラムを超えた取り組みをした証拠を重視すると述べています。

上記の例文はこれらの要件を念頭に置いて設計されています。Computer ScienceでOxfordまたはCambridgeを目指しているなら、自分のPersonal Statementが目指すべき深さと具体性の基準として活用してください。

よくあるご質問

Your personal statement must be no longer than 4,000 characters (including spaces) or 47 lines, whichever limit you hit first. Most successful statements use close to the full character allowance.
Start with a specific academic idea, question, or experience that sparked your interest in Computer Science. Admissions tutors read hundreds of statements — an opening that shows genuine intellectual curiosity stands out.
Only if they are directly relevant to your academic interest in Computer Science. Oxbridge tutors want evidence of intellectual engagement, not a list of achievements.
Most successful applicants go through 5 to 10 drafts. Ask a teacher or tutor who knows Computer Science at university level to give feedback.
Focus on specific problems or concepts that genuinely excited you. Describe a proof that changed how you think, a project you built to solve a real problem, or an idea you explored independently. Admissions tutors want evidence that you enjoy thinking about Computer Science, not just that you are good at exams.

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